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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Illusion

    Holy Mother of God. That was probably the most incredible poem I have read this year. I...I honestly don't know where to start. It was nuts, obviously, but that's what ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love, The Boy Above...

    Wow...this was kind of beautiful. Very touching, the boy writing a letter to his lost love from heaven. I like how you show all his painful emotions in the letter, ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The meaning of being Pretty

    Well, the intent is good, and of course the meaning is true as ever, but the presentation was slightly blase. It wasn't really different from the countless other times I've ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Dear You.

    Oh, my dear. It's quite likely you won't even read this review since you've already gotten so many and are probably no longer watching it like a hawk to see ...

    Sep 21, 2010
  • Script » General, General Re: Dark Angel (the play)

    Well, I must say I liked this very much, you have a very interesting story going here. The voice shift was all jacked up but I'm sure you can fix ...

    Sep 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Piano

    Oh, I can completely relate to this poem. I'm an obsessive pianist myself, have been playing for eight years and have reveled in every minute of it. Fabulous imagery! No ...

    Sep 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Not Enough Time

    Despite being a writer, and a poet at that, I can't express in words how sorry I am for what happened to you, and to your friend. I know how ...

    Sep 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Betrayl of the Lord's Wife

    Haha wow, you totally nailed the Anglo-Saxon style in all its mad glory. 'Twas a bit long and I think it would have fit better in Narrative or Dramatic poetry, ...

    Sep 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: deleted

    Before I say anything else, let me say that this is a beautiful poem and I really enjoyed it. Your imagery is lovely, as is your splendid evocation of mood ...

    Sep 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sparkling

    Oooooohhhhhh, I like this! Your imagery is lovely, and really carries the vivid yet dreamlike feeling of the poem well. I especially like the second stanza. My only quibble is ...

    Sep 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Awakening

    The best element of this poem (and it does have several good elements) is the tense, visceral, and dare I say masculine tone and style. One can easily distinguish it ...

    Sep 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Neuroses (a stream of consciousness)

    The word that I think best describes this poem (if it can really be called a poem, considering its highly prose-like style), is manic. It certainly does follow the stream-of-consciousness ...

    Sep 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Marie Antoinette

    Whoooooooaaaa. This is some serious awesomeness here. To be honest, I really hate to waltz in and write a gushing review for a poem that is already on the "Featured ...

    Sep 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Kept A Secret From You

    I liked this; it was angry without being over-the-top. You have some capitalization issues and line breaks in weird places, but maybe you intended it that way? "Insisted that we ...

    Aug 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Lullaby Of Your History

    First of all, I like how you don't specify what country the man and woman are from. It makes the poem relatable to all ethnicities. I also like how you ...

    Aug 29, 2010


And on the pedestal these words appear:/'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings;/Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'/Nothing beside remains.
— Percy Bysshe Shelley