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Re: Illusion
Holy Mother of God. That was probably the most incredible poem I have read this year. I...I honestly don't know where to start. It was nuts, obviously, but that's what ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Love, The Boy Above...
Wow...this was kind of beautiful. Very touching, the boy writing a letter to his lost love from heaven. I like how you show all his painful emotions in the letter, ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: The meaning of being Pretty
Well, the intent is good, and of course the meaning is true as ever, but the presentation was slightly blase. It wasn't really different from the countless other times I've ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Dear You.
Oh, my dear. It's quite likely you won't even read this review since you've already gotten so many and are probably no longer watching it like a hawk to see ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Dark Angel (the play)
Well, I must say I liked this very much, you have a very interesting story going here. The voice shift was all jacked up but I'm sure you can fix ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: Piano
Oh, I can completely relate to this poem. I'm an obsessive pianist myself, have been playing for eight years and have reveled in every minute of it. Fabulous imagery! No ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Not Enough Time
Despite being a writer, and a poet at that, I can't express in words how sorry I am for what happened to you, and to your friend. I know how ...
Sep 16, 2010 -
Re: Betrayl of the Lord's Wife
Haha wow, you totally nailed the Anglo-Saxon style in all its mad glory. 'Twas a bit long and I think it would have fit better in Narrative or Dramatic poetry, ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Before I say anything else, let me say that this is a beautiful poem and I really enjoyed it. Your imagery is lovely, as is your splendid evocation of mood ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Sparkling
Oooooohhhhhh, I like this! Your imagery is lovely, and really carries the vivid yet dreamlike feeling of the poem well. I especially like the second stanza. My only quibble is ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: The Awakening
The best element of this poem (and it does have several good elements) is the tense, visceral, and dare I say masculine tone and style. One can easily distinguish it ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Neuroses (a stream of consciousness)
The word that I think best describes this poem (if it can really be called a poem, considering its highly prose-like style), is manic. It certainly does follow the stream-of-consciousness ...
Sep 11, 2010 -
Re: Marie Antoinette
Whoooooooaaaa. This is some serious awesomeness here. To be honest, I really hate to waltz in and write a gushing review for a poem that is already on the "Featured ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: I Kept A Secret From You
I liked this; it was angry without being over-the-top. You have some capitalization issues and line breaks in weird places, but maybe you intended it that way? "Insisted that we ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Lullaby Of Your History
First of all, I like how you don't specify what country the man and woman are from. It makes the poem relatable to all ethnicities. I also like how you ...
Aug 29, 2010
